Re: [MI] core awareness

[Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>]

> From: Vladimir Prus <vladimir@codesourcery.com>
> Date: Wed, 16 Dec 2009 23:52:38 +0300
> 
> This is mostly MI change, but includes some remote protocol tweaks,
> and documentation. I'd appreciate review of those parts.

Thanks, see below for the documentation review.

> -several threads in the list.
> +several threads in the list.  The @var{core} field reports on which
> +processor core the stop event has happened.

Suggest to rephrase slightly:

  The @var{core} field reports the processor core on which the stop
  event has happened.

> +@item id
> +The numeric id assigned to the thread by @value{GDBN}. This field is
> +always present.                                      ^^

Two spaces, please.

> +Lists thread groups (@pxref{Thread groups}). When a single thread
> +group is passed as the argument, lists the children specified one.

Something is missing in the last sentence ("children of the specified
one"?).

> +are passed, the output always have a @samp{groups} result. The format
                                 ^^^^
"has"

> +thread.  It may be present 

Pedro already noticed this incomplete sentence.

> +@value{GDBN} gdb requests, using the @samp{qXfer:threads:read}
                ^^^
Remove the "gdb" part.

> +package (@pxref{qXfer threads read}) and XML document with the
> +format described below.

Sounds like an incomplete sentence (GDB requests what?).

Thanks.