Re: [remote] RFC: Replace qPart with qXfer

[Daniel Jacobowitz <drow@false.org>]

On Thu, Jun 22, 2006 at 10:54:42PM +0300, Eli Zaretskii wrote:
> > Date: Wed, 21 Jun 2006 23:17:31 -0400
> > From: Daniel Jacobowitz <drow@false.org>
> > 
> > Does anyone have any comments on this proposed change?
> 
> I saw some irregularities and tried to guess what was wrong in the
> Texinfo sources; hopefully this will be useful.

Thanks!

> >           Access the target's "auxiliary vector".  *Note auxiliary
> >           vector: OS Information, and see *Note read-aux-vector-packet:
>                                         ^^^
> This "see" is redundant.  I suspect you used "see @ref"; if so, just
> drop the "see" part.

(This was just moved from the qPart description.)

Confused.  The example in the Texinfo manual suggests "see @ref", and
says that you shouldn't just drop it, because e.g. "in *Note" is
considered awkward.

http://www.gnu.org/software/texinfo/manual/texinfo/html_node/ref.html#index-ref-374

> >     `m DATA'
> >           Data DATA (*note Binary Data:: has been read from the target.
>                                         ^^^
> A missing right paren after @pxref.
> 
> >     `l DATA'
> >           Data DATA (*note Binary Data:: has been read from the target.
> 
> Same here.

Right on both counts.  Fixed, thank you much.

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Daniel Jacobowitz
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