From: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
To: Vladimir Prus <vladimir@codesourcery.com>
Cc: gdb-patches@sources.redhat.com
Subject: Re: [RFA] [doc] thread-created/thread-exited
Date: Sat, 26 Apr 2008 19:05:00 -0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <umyngzcc8.fsf@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <200804262144.03702.vladimir@codesourcery.com>
> From: Vladimir Prus <vladimir@codesourcery.com>
> Date: Sat, 26 Apr 2008 21:44:03 +0400
>
> This patch documents the thread-create and thread-exited MI notification.
> It also fixes the terminology as bit -- the grammar say that out-of-band
> record is either async record or stream record, whereas the following docs
> first describe stream records and then talk about async records, but call
> them out-of-band.
>
> OK?
Did you actually try to say "make info" after applying these patches?
Because I don't see how it could fly: you've modified the name of a
node, but did not change the corresponding item in the @menu of the
section of which "GDB/MI Out-of-band Records" was a subsection. That
ought to trigger error messages from makeinfo.
> +The following is the list of possible async records
A colon at the end of this line, please.
> @table @code
> @item *stopped,reason="@var{reason}"
> +The target has stopped.
> +@item =thread-created,id="@var{id}"
> +@item =thread-exited,id="@var{id}"
> +A thread either was created, or has exited. The @var{id} field
> +contains the @var{GDBN} identifier of the thread.
> @end table
Please leave an empty line before an @item line, otherwise it will
look ugly in print. Also, you cannot have 2 @item lines in a row; all
but the first one must be @itemx, or else the formatting of the table
will come out wrong. Finally, 2 spaces after a period that ends a
sentence, please.
> +For the @samp{*stopped} async record, the @var{reason} field can have
> +one of the following values:
>
> @table @code
> @item breakpoint-hit
I'd put this right after the @item above that introduced the
`*stopped' record (yes, a table inside a table). Didactically, it is
better to have related information close together, rather than apart.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2008-04-26 18:45 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2008-04-26 17:54 Vladimir Prus
2008-04-26 19:05 ` Eli Zaretskii [this message]
2008-04-26 22:23 ` Vladimir Prus
2008-04-26 22:42 ` Eli Zaretskii
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