Hi Eli, Thanks for your review. On Fri, Apr 12, 2013 at 1:52 AM, Eli Zaretskii wrote: >> Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2013 14:19:03 +0800 >> From: Hui Zhu >> >> This patch is doc update for "QTDDCsrc" and "qTDC". > > Thanks. > >> +@item QTDDCsrc:@var{bytes} >> +@cindex define default collect, remote request >> +@cindex @samp{QTDDCsrc} packet >> +@var{bytes} is the string, encoded in hexadecimal. >> +It specify a source string of default collect. > ^^^^^^^ > "specifies" > > By the way, why is it called a "source" string? Because it is same with QTDPsrc: string, encoded in hexadecimal. I think it is not very good for this part now. So I removed it. > >> +These packets request default collect on the target. Replies to >> +this packet generally take the form of the @code{QTDDCsrc} packet that >> +define default collect. > ^^^^^^ > "defines" Fixed. > >> +Replies: >> +@table @samp >> +@item DC@var{bytes} >> +@var{bytes} is the string, encoded in hexadecimal. It take the form of >> +the @code{QTDDCsrc} packet that define default collect.^^^^ > ^^^^^^ > "takes" and "defines" Fixed. > > OK with those changes. Post a new version. Please help me review. Best, Hui 2013-04-16 Hui Zhu * gdb.texinfo (Tracepoint Packets) Add "QTDDCsrc" and "qTDC".