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From: Eli Zaretskii <eliz@gnu.org>
Subject: Re: Ping: CRC32 documentation patch
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> From: Jeremy Bennett <jeremy.bennett@embecosm.com>
> Cc: gdb-patches@sourceware.org
> Date: Wed, 05 Aug 2009 11:24:04 +0100
> 
> I've split the polynomial over two lines in a display. makehtml barfs on
> the naked braces needed for multi-digit exponents, so I've set that
> explicitly in HTML. Now looks OK in PDF, HTML and info.
> 
> I've fixed the double spaces between sentences. I found a handful of
> other places where these were needed, so I've taken the opportunity to
> fix them at the same time.
> 
> I've adopted your suggested wording - much clearer.

Thanks.  This version is fine.  I committed it.