On 11/16/2011 01:03 AM, Eli Zaretskii wrote:
>> > +                                                              Similar
>> > +to breakpoint, @dfn{pending tracepoint}---tracepoint whose address is
>> > +not yet resolved, is supported as well.
> Putting verbs at the end of the sentence produces awkward and hard to
> understand sentences (unless you talk in German or Japanese ;-).

This applies to Chinese as well :)

> Using passive tense makes it even more so.  I would reword like this:
> 
>   In addition, @value{GDBN} supports @dfn{pending tracepoints}---
>   tracepoints whose address is not yet resolved.  (This is similar to
>   pending breakpoints.)

That looks good.

Eli, Luis,
Thanks for your suggestions.  Here is a new one.

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Yao (齐尧)