From: "Eli Zaretskii" <eliz@gnu.org>
To: Mark Kettenis <kettenis@chello.nl>
Cc: gdb-patches@sources.redhat.com
Subject: Re: [PATCH] BSD libkvm documentation
Date: Sat, 03 Jul 2004 21:09:00 -0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <3405-Sun04Jul2004000929+0300-eliz@gnu.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <200407031332.i63DWFeQ021626@elgar.kettenis.dyndns.org> (message from Mark Kettenis on Sat, 3 Jul 2004 15:32:15 +0200 (CEST))
> Date: Sat, 3 Jul 2004 15:32:15 +0200 (CEST)
> From: Mark Kettenis <kettenis@chello.nl>
>
> Eli, are these doc bits OK?
Yes, but please fix these small gotchas before you commit:
> +@node BSD libkvm Interface
> +@subsection BSD libkvm Interface
> +
> +@kindex libkvm
"libkvm" is not a command, right? If so, @kindex is wrong here;
please use eithe @cindex or @pindex.
> +@table @code
> +@kindex kvm pcb
> +@item kvm pcb
> +Set current context from pcb address.
> +
> +@kindex kvm proc
> +@item kvm proc
There's no reason to have 2 index entries both starting with "kvm"
and both pointing to the same page; it just bloats the index. Please
leave only the first @kindex entry and make it say just "@kindex kvm".
Thanks.
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2004-07-03 21:09 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 6+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2004-07-03 13:32 Mark Kettenis
2004-07-03 21:09 ` Eli Zaretskii [this message]
2004-07-04 7:03 ` Mark Kettenis
2004-07-04 19:14 ` Eli Zaretskii
2004-07-05 16:04 ` Mark Kettenis
2004-07-09 18:52 ` Eli Zaretskii
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